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Friday Five: It's Alive!: What makes a character feel real?

Lately I've been pondering the question "What makes a character feel real?" In other words, what makes a character come alive, jump off the page, feel like a full-fledged human being. Here are five thoughts for this Friday:

1. The character has a distinctive way of speaking, thinking, and viewing the world.

2. He or she has some kind of inner driving force that propels him/her through life. He/she is not just sitting around observing.

3. The character has a history (that the writer, and sometimes the reader, is privy to) that has shaped who she/he is in the context of the story.

4. Each character has a mixture of characteristics that demonstrate different sides of the personality, not just one character trait. No one is just one thing all the time. There must be a combination of strengths, weaknesses, differences, etc.

5. The way the character interacts with other characters is consistent enough to be believably one person, but at the same time allows us to see different sides of that character. In other words, we don't act exactly the same with everyone in our lives. Let us see how the character is different with different people and show us what that reveals about him/her.

What makes a character come alive for you?

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Friday Five: Where I've Been and What I Learned

I'm back! I hope everyone has been enjoying the last bit of summer. My younger child went back to school yesterday and it felt like a very abrupt end to summer. But before that, I had a really relaxing and rejuvenating couple of weeks. One of the great things for me about getting away is that I really give myself permission to put absolutely everything I usually worry about on the back burner. (I highly recommend doing this from time to time -- what a gift!) Here's some of what I did and where it led me:

1. My husband and I stayed at a B&B in Murphys, California. It's a tiny little Old West type town known as "The Queen of the Sierra". Okay, honestly, I have no idea why it would be known as that, but it was very cute. And we stayed in a really fantastic B&B called Dunbar House which was built in 1880 and has lots of old world charm. The breakfasts were way too rich for my blood -- soufflés and bread pudding and thick, creamy parfaits. Just having time to 'be' and not 'do' was amazing, time to read books, time to reconnect and talk about whatever instead of discussing who's taking which child where the next day, etc. all made for a really special time.

2. We went for a five and a half mile hike in Big Trees State Park, where they have the biggest trees on earth. Part of this little adventure was book research, but it was also just for fun. We hiked in the less-touristy part of the park and were thrilled to find we had it mostly to ourselves. And some of the trees were tremendous. Just taking regular steps, it took 40 of mine to circle the largest tree. It was quiet there in a way that's different -- no humming of machinery, no cars passing by -- only the scurrying of super cute little chipmunks. That hike reminded me about the importance of stillness and quiet and how much we need that in our lives from time to time.

3. We also hiked for five and a half miles in the Hetch Hetchy Reservoir area of Yosemite, which was gorgeous and also less busy than other parts of Yosemite. It was hot that day, which made the hike more of a challenge, but the majesty of the surroundings was definitely worth it. And I was reminded of how important it is to find time to be in nature, to feel the spray of a waterfall or look out on a body of water or feel little next to a huge granite cliff. Life gets so busy and we rush, rush, rush all the time. This was a great reminder to make time for connecting in nature. We also lost the trail at one point, but that led us to a fun area, where the way was more challenging, but also more fun.

4. Then we went to the summer camp where our kids had already been for a week. My husband volunteered as camp doctor for the next week. What a treat to get to be a fly on the wall and see what our kids were up to at camp And there I had absolutely no responsibilities -- no online commitments, no cooking or housework, not even taking care of the kids. I read a lot, wrote some, walked some, and spent a lot of time sitting on our little cabin's porch, feeling the breeze and watching people. It was incredibly relaxing -- time out of time -- and really recharged my batteries.

5. Last night I went to my writing group, where we always do a little meditation/visualization before we start writing. And I realized there that writing is a guide to me about how to live my life. When I write, as I've said before, I don't outline or plot out a story, I just write and see where it takes me. At any given point in the story, there are infinite possibilities of where the story might go next. Usually, my logical brain says, "Oh, it should go here." But there's this other part of me that feels something else. "Let's try this instead," it says. I feel nervous, I think, "What? Really? But what if it doesn't work?" But I know I can always backtrack if I have to, so I go for it without stressing. I'm hoping that someday I'll learn to live my life this way: Go with that intuitive feeling, trust that it'll work out. And even though it's not always so easy to backtrack in life, let go of the stress and see where the path takes me. It might be more challenging, but it might also be more fun.

Happy Trails!

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Friday Five: What I'll Be Doing When I'm Not Blogging The Next Two Weeks

Yes, it's true, I'll be taking a blogging hiatus for the next couple of weeks. I know -- you're heartbroken Here are five ways I'll be spending my time while I'm not blogging:

1. Admiring the ginormous trees in Calaveras Big Trees State Park. These are the biggest trees on earth.

2. Exploring Yosemite -- hiking in the majestic park (where hopefully it won't be too horribly hot or crowded )

3. Getting away to a cute little B&B with my husband while our kids are at sleep-away camp! This is the first time our youngest has gone, so while I'm excited to have some down time with my husband, I'm also freaking out about how the little guy is going to do at camp : /

4. Researching a part of California where my current work-in-progress takes place

5. And hopefully, WRITING!!! 

I can't believe how fast this summer has gone! All too soon it's going to be school supplies and homework for the kids and paperwork for the parents and lunch boxes and rush rush rush. Sigh. I'll be back with the Friday Five on August 20th. Till then, hope you all have an amazingly wonderful rest of your summer!

xo

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Debs Do It Again: Shani Petroff

It's been a while since I posted an interview with one of my 2009 Deb buddies. But today we are fortunate to have Shani Petroff stopping by. She's here to tell us about her third book in the Bedeviled series, which came out in June.



Being a teen is tough. Especially when your dad's the devil. Literally.


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ngel is not sure she'll ever gain control of the powers she inherited from her devil father. All she meant to do was help poor nerdy Max break into the popular crowd. But somehow the wires got crossed and she ended up granting all of her best friend Gabi’s secret desires instead. Not that Angel has anything against Gabi getting what she wants. It’s just that the things Gabi dreams about on the QT—1) starring in a reality TV show with Angel at her side and 2) dating Angel’s boyfriend, Cole—just happen to be the stuff of Angel’s worst nightmares.


Shani! Thanks for stopping by! I love this series! Please tell us what you love  most about Angel?

I love that Angel never gives up. She always has a new idea or brainstorm to get her out of a problem or to help a friend--even if that involves using the powers she inherited from the devil. Powers that often get her into loads of trouble!

Very entertaining trouble If you were spending the day with her what would you do together?

Well, since she has powers, the possibilities are endless. I'd love to see outer space, pop on over to Italy for lunch, get to guest star in a movie, and so on. But that would all be pretty risky, since Angel hasn't quite mastered her "special gift"! 

Shani, what advice do you have to offer about making your dreams come true?

Don't let anyone discourage you from following your dreams. There will be a lot of people that say, "That's impossible... only a few people ever make it." Well, why can't one of those people be you? If it's something you believe in, something you love, don't give up. Hard work, dedication, and a little bit of luck go a long way.

Excellent advice! Thank you

To learn more about Shani and the Bedeviled series, check out her website

See you Friday for the Five. Have a great week!  

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Friday Five: On Creating Character Through Memory

When you think about your childhood home, notice how imbued with meaning and memory every item is -- the couch that you slept on when your grandparents were visiting, the dining room table where holidays were celebrated, your bookshelf that held all your treasured toys, books, yearbooks, etc. It's almost impossible to think of the place or its objects without thinking also of how and when they were used or special memories you associate with them. So when you build a home for your characters, the same must be true. You can give them a bedroom or a home with things inside of it. But if you don't take the time to create the surrounding memories, your character's home will be hollow. Is this time-consuming? Yes. Is it worth it? Definitely. Here's a Friday Five list to get you started:

1. Look at your character's bedroom furniture. What do you know about it? Was it hand-me-down? A perfect gift of exactly what he/she wanted? Or maybe a gift that didn't hit the mark? Or maybe she's had it her whole life and can't imagine anything else? Or maybe she's sick of seeing the same thing everyday? What do you know about her bedroom furniture?

2. How about the other rooms in the house? Are there special memories there? Are there frightening ones? Why does he avoid the back bedroom? Why is the screen on the window torn? What does the dining table look like? Were early family dinners fun or stressful?

3. What about the yard? What's in it? Is it big or small, does it have trees or grass? But also, why are the outdoor chairs rotting? Why does no one use the hammock? Or does the whole neighborhood gather here to play in the pool or on the basketball court? Who built the tree house in the backyard? What kind of memories happened inside it?

4. Are there rooms in the house that are off-limits to your character? And if so, why? And does she obey the rules? What might she look for in there? What might she find? Is it an older sibling that made the rule or a parent? And what associations does your main character have to the items in that room?

5. What about the family room? Is there one chair everyone fights over? Is there a fireplace where s'mores were made and toes were warmed after playing in the snow? Is there a table where he bumped his head as a toddler? Are there games? What kind?

You get the idea. The more time you take to create a world that is whole and alive, the more real it will feel to your reader and the more vivid your characters will be to you.

Enjoy the weekend and Happy Writing

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Friday Five: Writing Craft

I hate to admit it, but sometimes having to wait for what you want can be a good thing. Like in the summer I don't have as much time to write. In fact, before this week, I'd gone several weeks without any writing time at all. But THEN, when I got a couple of mornings to write this week, everything that had been brewing and percolating during my hiatus came pouring out. And in just those few mornings, I wrote over twenty pages on my work-in-progress! This story is flowing in a very different way from other stories I've written. It's more plot-based (as opposed to my usual character-driven stories.) Because of that there is much less detail and texture to this first draft than I'm used to. In some ways that scares me because I worry about whether I'll be able to "fix" it. But it's also exciting to watch the plot unfold so quickly. I've also been doing a little reading on the craft of writing, in part to reassure myself that many writers write this way and that I will be able to go back and deepen characters, flesh out details, etc. I recommend Writing The Breakout Novel by Donald Maass to anyone looking for a good book on writing. Here's a quick list of revision steps I'll take once I get to the end.

1. Character sketches. Get to know them inside and out, even elements that don't play into this story. Then weave in some of what I've learned about them. Make sure every character is multi-dimensional and sympathetic.

2. Setting sketches. Immerse myself in the setting, pick up details from all my senses. Get to know the feel of the town and its history and the layout. Sketch out the buildings, houses, rooms in which the characters spend time.

3. Read-through for tension and conflict. Is it present throughout? It doesn't have to be life-or-death on every page, but there should be something that keeps the reader concerned enough to need to turn the page.

4. Raise the stakes. This is something I've heard in many conferences, workshops, books, etc. Make it matter. Make the reader care.

5. Voice. Do the teens sound like teens? Do all characters sound like real people, not just their overarching title (such as "parent", "policeman", "bully") Does the feel of the narrator remain consistent or at least does it shift appropriately according to what she is going through.

I'm sure there will be plenty more to look for, but that's my initial list. And I'm jumping the gun since I'm not done with draft one yet! But at least now it's here in black and white as a helpful reminder. Hope some of you find it helpful, too!

Happy weekend

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Friday Five: Favorite Summer Moments

I just finished reading a YA novel called Sorta Like A Rock Star. There were things I loved about it and things that got on my nerves. I also cried buckets of tears, half of them while sitting on a bench at my son's mixed martial arts class, surreptitiously wiping the tears so people wouldn't come over to see if I was okay. One of the things I liked about the book was this character who was a Vietnam vet who wrote haikus. His way of dealing with life and the trauma of what he'd been through was focusing on the present moment, writing haikus that captured one moment. I've never written haikus, but it's something I might play with. In the meantime, in the spirit of present-moment appreciation, here are five summertime moments I appreciate:

1. Catching fireflies at dusk
2. Watching a thunderstorm from a screened-in porch
3. Reuniting with old friends
4. Lying in the hot sand on a breezy beach listening to the rolling waves
5. Licking melty ice cream cones on a hot afternoon with my kids, rescue missions to save the drips before they dive off the edge of the cone

What are some of your favorite summer moments?

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Friday Five: Inspiration for Independence

Since it's the 4th of July weekend, I thought I'd do a list this week related to independence, not our nation's independence, more like individual independence. What does independence mean to you?

When I was a teen, it probably meant being out in the world on my own without my parents there to tell me what I could or couldn't do. As an adult it has meant different things at different times, depending on what situation I was in and how I felt about it. For example, when I was in a graduate program that didn't suit me well I felt like I had to try to be someone I wasn't. The summer before my last year there, right around July 4th, I got my nose pierced. Now I'm not recommending you go get your nose pierced. But at the time, it made me feel like I'd taken control, somehow, like I was saying "I'm going to be me and not hide anymore. Take me or leave me as you will. But I'm going to be me." 

What does independence mean to you? And how might you reach for it in your own life?

1. Do you believe in the possibility of your dream coming true? Or do you mostly mope about the fact that it hasn't yet? Dig deep, find that place inside where anything is possible. Because if you're not supporting the dream, who will?

2. Are you working towards your goal? Whether it's writing or getting into a school you like, or changing jobs, put your heart into it. Don't let the "no's" deter you. "No" doesn't mean never, it just means not yet. (I think I read that in a blog post somewhere recently, but I don't remember whose.) You can get there if you don't give up.

3. What's holding you back? Sometimes situations contain us that we have to hang in there with for a while, like being a teen in our parents' homes. There's a reason for this. We need to grow step by step, get prepared to handle the world on our own a little at a time. Trust this. Use that time to do all you can to be as ready as you can be when the time comes. But in other circumstances, we hold ourselves back. We don't want to stir the waters or rock the boat. What's one small step you could take in the direction of your dream?

4. Are you a fierce dreamer? Do you have the tenacity to hang on when the ride gets wild? Or do you let the dream drift away when it gets too tough? How much do you want it? If the ride were on the back of an untamed fire-breathing dragon, could you hang on? Would it be worth it? Only you can know that. But if it is, hold tight!

5. As the fireworks explode in their multi-colored glory on Sunday, imagine they're going off in celebration of YOUR dream come true. You never know, maybe they are...

Happy Independence Day

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Friday Five: Writing Prompts!

It's Friday Five time! Here are five prompts to jump start your writing:

1. Write a piece including these five words: raft, cocoa, doorknob, whoosh, tingle

2. Start with this sentence from Love Walked In by Marisa De Los Santos "I watched one kid cry as his mother peeled him off the pole he clung to."

3. Imagine you are in an airport, traveling alone, and it is shut down due to a bomb scare. You are stuck in the airport indefinitely. You strike up a conversation with the person sitting next to you on the floor at the gate. He/She is not the type of person with whom you would usually converse. 

4. Start with this quote: "Dreams are illustrations...from the book your soul is writing about you." (Marsha Norman)

5. Choose a character from a piece you're working on, ask him/her to tell you about his/her most vivid memory from childhood.

Hope some of these help you find the flow! I'm off to float on a river for a few days. See you back here next Friday!

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Playlist!

Just for fun, I thought I'd post the playlist for my manuscript that is out on submission right now. Most of these songs are referenced in the story, although a few of them were just songs I listened to a lot while writing the manuscript. 

Defying Gravity (Wicked)
For Good (Wicked)
As Long As You're Mine (Wicked)
Will I (Rent)
One Song Glory (Rent)
Anything Can Happen (Mary Poppins)
The Call (The Chronicles of Narnia)
How To Save A Life (The Fray)
Hey There Delilah (Plain White T's)
1,2,3,4 (Plain White T's)

What do you think?

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